Letter to a friend

Kassie,
  I was writing you to tell you a little bit about my ethnographic project for my third year writing class hoping you could give me some feedback and different ideas about what to do to make my project strong and look complete. I am doing my project over how I feel God is moving through the people at Old Hickory Church of Christ, and how that movement is going to allow his love and his word to be spread to others. Since you have been attending this church with me for so many years I figured you would have some good ideas on what to do in order to make the project look more complete. Who should I talk to? What events do you think are the main ones that help  the people of Old Hickory Church of Christ grow spiritually? I know that you have gone on some of the mission trips and I would like to talk to you about your experience and how the trip made you feel, as well as the expressing what gratitude you saw from the families in Mexico that we helped. My plan with the project is to focus on two themes: 1) How is God moving through the members of the church? 2) How is God moving through the community of people that the church reaches out to? If you have any other suggestions please let me know. Remember this is an ethnographic project so I have to have lots of information about the culture of our church.
  Thanks
    Kelsi